This poem is very deep from the moment i started reading i got that sense. it seems your just in a great struggle. and yet your feelings are clear. what ever become of these events?

Love it love the emotion flow and especially the ending when you get the chance take a look at some of my poetry (mostly love) but i try

Wow. this is amazing. you can feel the frustration every single poet feels. i know i feel this way. i feel too small to put it all into words. that i am not good enough to do so. that's what i saw in this poem. amazing.

A very interesting take on one of the beatitudes
BEAUTIFULLY WRITTEN!

Oh but you can, you are brlliant!!

Darkness & light all at once classic & modern, left me breathless!!

I've spend some time reading a few of yours and I have to say this is my favourite so far. That ending is perfect, but these lines stood out to me most:

"We write because we'd die without our words.
We write, and we are murdered by our words. "

Beautiful.

..well, yes but, personally,
I am a lot more relaxed
about it
now that I'm a lot older..

vigorously effective little rant here....