Comments : Twisted Lullaby

  • 9 years ago

    by Jack Rabbit

    Amazing poem and amazing job. I look forward to reading more by you. :]

  • 9 years ago

    by abril williams

    Well is nothing to sing to a child but your words are vivid and your expressions are completely mind-blowing. simpily beautiful.!!

  • 9 years ago

    by Kayla

    Wow, Mina! This poem was very beautiful and full of so much emotion. I couldn't take my eyes off it whenever I read it. The title alone captured my attention and the poem itself was even better! It was nicely organized too and looked very professional. Great job! 5/5 <3 <3 <3

    ~Kayla~

  • 9 years ago

    by XdangerouslyXgenuineX

    Rad poem mina baby

  • 9 years ago

    by SiLeNtLy ScReAmInG

    Awesome poem Mina!
    The title is what made me want to read it, and then I read the poem and I was like WOW!! That is an awesome poem!! Nice Job.

  • 9 years ago

    by Emilie

    Amazing peom. I think you did absolutly awsome with it ;P
    keep it up.

  • 9 years ago

    by xXxVampxXx

    Omg wicked poem <3 ur shit keep it up!!!

  • 9 years ago

    by omgitsmina

    Only on askaninja.com.

  • 9 years ago

    by Woe

    Wowwww.... i LOVE. im gonna write music to it so i can sing my lonely self to sleep. =] lol

  • 9 years ago

    by LovingANDwaiting

    Wow this poem was really moving! i love ur work! keep it up!

    !M@RY!

  • 9 years ago

    by Cliche Fairytale Ending

    Good poem

  • 9 years ago

    by Kenny

    Very good poem. Took me just to the edge of your soul...leaving me wanting more.

    Great Work!

    K~

  • 9 years ago

    by she

    .......wow!

  • 9 years ago

    by kylexthexmagnificent

    Omg...this poem is soo effin awesome!! great job!! ilove the flow of it and its just so amazing. great job, and the words i write i could definitely relate too. great job

  • 9 years ago

    by Ashley

    Really really dark but such an exquisite piece of writing that almost makes you scared when you read it...not a easy task. 5/5

  • 9 years ago

    by azii

    This is frickkken Awweesomeee!
    i just love it!! except the great flow and rhyming, the words, the idea, they're just greatt! wonderful job! I really loved it!
    5/5 from me
    kep it up

  • 9 years ago

    by Jahieda

    GREAT 5/5

  • 9 years ago

    by Fear2love

    I love this poem, ur great

  • 9 years ago

    by Dark Secrets

    This is such a great poem I love the first stanza... wow wow wow

  • 9 years ago

    by Dark Secrets

    This is such a great poem I love the first stanza... wow wow wow