Comments : Defeated

  • 16 years ago

    by K3LS3Y

    That wuz really good. i hope ur ok!!! :-)

  • 16 years ago

    by Always and Never

    I really enjoyed the way you wrote this. the rythm is really smooth. great job 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Hollywood

    I think that any person who can make someone feel like this does not deserve your kinda love you offer her all your love and all she does is hurt you but if you love her like you say you do there is nothing i can do but i love this its great 100/100

  • 16 years ago

    by oNice

    Good job! I couldn't think of a better way of ending a poem like this than the way you did 5/5
    -oNice

  • 15 years ago

    by WhiskeyGirl

    Beautiful poem.
    I really liked it.

    Sincerely, Sammie-Leigh.