Breath-taking. I can't believe i'm the first to leave a comment :):) *first comment dance*
you're great.
~*~Amber~*~

Wow this was really excellent
it actually makes you think about wut love really is and in the end answers it for you
very well done
just a few things

u wrote lofe instead of love where it says
and lofe is what we live for

and also you wrote
for once could live without malice...
once should be one

but a very good writing 5/5

Wow. you are amazing. If you published these in a book i would buy it. The passion you write with, the phrasing it is phenomenal.

thank you. so much.