Comments : Another Lie

  • 15 years ago

    by Fake Facade

    Wow.
    really great poem.
    emotional too.

    definately 5 out of 5

  • 15 years ago

    by C P Sharma

    We all have a sense of incompleteness and an urge to fill up that gap because we are truncated souls. Those who can introspect feel it more intensely to connect with the missing link. Your poem perfectly catches up thar spirit. The whole poem flows so well and its simplicity is deeply impressive. 5/5

  • 15 years ago

    by Melody Christina

    Ok. Beautiful Poem!!! 5/5
    This is exactly how i feel right now!
    Hope you are over him already....and i hope i will stop crying one day tooo. T_T
    take care
    *Melody*

  • 15 years ago

    by nayee

    This is brilliant.
    much better than ANYTHING I've EVER written, posted on here or not.

    and I can relate to your feelings, I went through that not too long ago.

    chin up hun, and keep smiling.
    you have talent!
    5/5 xoxo

  • 14 years ago

    by Dark Shadows

    A 5/5

    You are not alone.
    Cheers!