Comments : Addiction

  • 16 years ago

    by CY GINDLE

    WOWW WWWWWW THIS poem blew me
    away. it belongs under Dark
    5/5 MAN I LOVE THIS

  • 16 years ago

    by Cheshire Kat

    Very spooky, and very true. addictions are one of the worst reapers in the world, and I am very aganist them. You used good imagery and your use of metaphors were good. "death's angel"...XD very nice!

  • 16 years ago

    by noha

    Beautiful,nice tittle and true deep
    its too dark and i love your way in write
    5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Unamed

    Wow..this was great!!!..i like how u added the word addiction seperate and capitalized..it had a nice evffect!!
    ***aLy***