Comments : This is what happens

  • 9 years ago

    by IMissYou

    This poem is really nice liked it alot..x

  • 9 years ago

    by Tara

    Very well written and short and too the point, great job ---tara

  • 9 years ago

    by Shellaine shelli

    Wow, that was so deep
    and really true,
    I know exactly what that feels like!!
    Great job,
    loved reading this poem
    ***Take Care***

  • 9 years ago

    by sexyCheckers

    Can totally relate!!
    5/5

  • 9 years ago

    by Freckles

    Whoa keep it up! 5/5

  • 8 years ago

    by AnCi

    Again you surprise me with your ending! AmAzing!

  • 7 years ago

    by Second to None

    Wow, this is sooo good(:

  • 5 years ago

    by Yrem Crish

    Wow! I really love the lines..the rhymes and the meaning of this poems..I rate it 5/5