This is a heartfelt piece, and it's dripping with sorrow.. now if you take the title "outhouse" use it as a metaphor, along with your feelings it can take on a very powerful meaning indeed. Just a creative idea and suggestion. You might try a part two to this as well, using a suggestion as stated above. I always like to give ideas if I can.

This piece is such a powerful poem and I am thankful you shared this with us.