Comments : Chains And Spiders

  • 9 years ago

    by Beautiful Soul

    Wow Saffie, This has a dark and sadistic feeling that gives the reader a chilling imagery. I don't think this really happened to you, so maybe it is a phobia that you have night mares about? Or something you saw in a movie one time? I think it is the first one though. You have fears of spiders and being tied up with no where to move. I love how you introverted the basement. it gives more of an eeire feeling and gives the reader the mind set of what you are setting up to. then the plots hits you and you start to feel the character agony. I loved the rhyming in this as well, I think it flows well with the rest of the poem and gives us some sane to this insane poem. 5/5