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  • 8 years ago

    by Baby Rainbow

    MaryAnne has given us a thought-provoking piece with this entry this week, and I couldn't help but read it several times and grow more attached with each read. I feel it sits on such an honest situation, with honest thoughts swirling around that ink. I feel it was portrayed more as a diary entry, or a letter to the Mother, and still the flow was pleasant and smooth. Powerful emotion of guilt within this piece, and a sorrowful tone, but at the same time there is a sense that the guilt cannot be too deep because this is simply how it is, and has to be. Really interesting write