Comments : Testified (Tanka)

  • 8 years ago

    by Gadfly

    Some part of this poem is hidden to the audience as the result of the personal circumstance that is covered from the eyes of the writer, due to the common confusion of the ' obvious', between the narrator and the readers.
    The reader would never fully understands that how could being latched to someone's words could be interpreted to guilt, without a vigorous stretch of imagination which would be more speculative, rather than being artistic. But the writer might never realize that because the personal connection is already there, and too real. Why? Because latching to the beautiful words, that was spread once, the latching that is stress firmly that would not continue, seem like burden , a guilt, on the shoulder of she who knows she must let go, but those word are already spread, not only on the quantified surface but, to the depth of her heart, so she must defend herself because she self-consciously assumes that dependency is a guilt.

    • 8 years ago

      by Meme

      Thank you so much for the commwnt :)