For a Pessimist, I'm pretty optimistic.

  • HOLLYWOODxBANGBANG
    15 years ago

    ------------------------------- RESULTS AT BOTTOM ---------------------------------

    Rules are simple:

    1. Reserve
    2. No cutting or suicide poems, please
    3. Any length is fine, just not too long.
    4. Any type or form
    5. Three titles per person, two per title
    6. Due Date: February 20, 2009

    1. Born For This
    -Something to Say -- DONE.
    - Beyond Repair

    2. Breathe
    - Kenny -- DONE.
    - Twisted Heart -- DONE.

    3. For a Pessimist, I'm pretty optimistic
    -Nyell Moonlight -- DONE.
    -We Will Make Our Own Music -- DONE.

    4. I Caught Myself
    -LilMissFrosty -- DONE.
    -Simplyfrigid -- DONE.

    5. Never Let This Go
    -Temps -- DONE.
    - Lonely Rider -- DONE.

    6. Love's Not a Competition [But I'm Winning..]
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    7. Until Tomorrow
    -That One Guy
    - Sole

    8. That's What You Get
    -LilMissFrosty -- DONE.
    - Kira2 -- DONE.

    9. Perfect
    -Something to Say -- DONE.
    -To Be With You -- DONE.

    10. Here We Go Again
    -Trippetta
    -

  • Courageous Dreamer
    15 years ago

    Never Let This Go please.
    Thank you.

  • Jenni Marie
    15 years ago

    I caught myself + That's what you get please.

  • Poet on the Piano
    15 years ago

    Born for this + Perfect, please

  • NyellMoonlight
    15 years ago

    For a Pessimist, I'm pretty optimistic

  • trippetta TC
    15 years ago

    I'd like to try here we go again

  • Lonely Rider
    15 years ago

    Never let this go, please

  • Jenni Marie
    15 years ago

    That's What You Get

    {Didn't anyone ever tell you...you shouldn't play games...}

    Let your ridiculous lies go on for so long
    Ignored all of the accusations and threats
    But you should know I don't forgive that easily
    And everything you've said I'll never forget

    Yet now you want to pretend like everything's okay
    Still adamant that you did nothing wrong
    Unfortunately for you I moved on a long time ago
    In your arms is no longer where I belong

    What did you think, that everything would be fine?
    That I'd forgive and forget, just let it go?
    Sorry to burst your bubble, it happened to much
    And I've let you get away with to much crap before

    Amusing how I used to be wrapped around your finger
    Yet now I can no longer stand to see your face
    Whenever I think of everything you got away with
    Leaves me with a feeling of disgust and distaste

    Makes me laugh at how much it stunned you
    When finally your love I was able to reject
    Thought I'd let you keep playing me forever
    Darling, that's not something that you will get

  • Jenni Marie
    15 years ago

    I Caught Myself

    After everything that he did to me, thought I'd never recover
    Feeling the world had ended, for I could only ever love him
    Someone who made me euphoric had left me to suffer
    That's how I felt until that day when you walked in

    Noticing that slowly this broken heart was mending
    Without warning you were taking piece by piece
    Slowly putting all those shards together again
    All that hurt and pain, you became it's release

    I'd sworn to myself never to love again
    Adamant that I was going to lock my heart away
    I'd finally tired of empty days and sleepless nights
    Didn't want to be that heart broken cliche

    Thought I tried to resist, caught myself falling
    Praying that each day I could fight my feelings
    Love had become so repulsive to me again
    Only now transformed into something so appealing

    It's true that I caught myself hoping you felt the same
    Longing to be in your embrace something that I yearned
    And no words could ever possibly begin to describe
    How I felt upon realizing my love was returned

  • xToBeWithYoux
    15 years ago

    Perfect please :)

  • Poet on the Piano
    15 years ago

    Born For This~Senryu

    Created to avail,
    A divine all-knowing God,
    Lifting His name high.

  • xToBeWithYoux
    15 years ago

    Perfect (I'm Amazed By You)

    Let our souls soar
    To the heavens,
    Let them open every door:
    Our love does the same.

    Gazing into your eyes
    Sets my heart on fire.
    Your love is my prize:
    And boy, I'm addicted.

    I hold you close to me,
    Forever twirling
    In this aroma of glee:
    Our first dance.

    White satin ruffled,
    Black tuxedo smooth.
    My words are muffled:
    "I'll love you forever."

    Our song keeps playing,
    The night is young.
    We keep on swaying:
    Oh, I'm amazed by you.

  • Beyond Repair
    15 years ago

    Born for this please

  • Kimberley
    15 years ago

    Perfect Please.

  • Kimberley
    15 years ago

    Perfect

    They look at me with scorn
    But this is just the way I was born
    Sorry my hair doens't look quite right
    Sorry I don't always put up a fight
    If I say something wrong I apoligize
    Because I"m not all that wise
    Sorry I can't be perfect
    Sorry I have my defects

    If I trip going down the stairs
    Everyone looks at me with glares
    If I don't constantly have a smile on my face
    They act like it's a murder case
    Well I'm sorry I'm not like you
    Copying every little thing you do
    Sorry I can't be prefect
    Sorry I'm somebody you can't worship

    ~KM~

  • Curing the Comon Cliche
    15 years ago

    The Optimist (I)

    Optimist
    the world is yours
    Flowing free
    And bright
    The world looks like
    Twinkling stars
    Little beads of light

    Nothing
    Nowhere
    Can hurt you
    Nothing
    Nowhere
    Can be
    The kinda thing that makes you break
    Fall down on your knees...

    Optimist is happy
    Look at your point of view
    Birds get jealous
    From the height
    You are at and looking through

    Optimist the world is yours
    You see a brighter day
    The golden threads
    Of love
    Of life
    Twirl a long the way

    The Pessimist (II)

    Let's take a darker lens shall we?
    And cover up the light
    The world is less than colours
    But way more than black and white
    The spectrum in between
    Is pitiful and grey
    How can one be happy
    When night has seized your day?

    The pessimist is unhappy
    But dear reader you're surprised?
    The world is ever darker
    The twisted outlook of ones lies

    Oh, how poetic does his speech progress
    He twists words with such ease
    As he begs his mind to stop
    But it hurts him with each please

    The twisted metal wreck
    That is his heart car crash
    The view on life now shattered too
    Scattered shards of glass
    On the pavement twinkle
    Like blood wrought stars in the sky
    That twirl around on golden ribbon
    And once they snap. We Die

    It's a two part poem, I don't know if it qualifies... but I'd like this to be under the category "for an pessimist I'm pretty optimistic"

  • Lonely Rider
    15 years ago

    Never let this go
    (A tribute to Mother Earth)

    Soothing morning breeze,
    twinkling crystal water
    Silently vanishing as,
    Carbons take over

    Cancerous molecules
    clawing at our sight,
    mutating into greed,
    unquenchable appetite

    Stump disposed shade,
    plastic souvenirs,
    chemicallized clouds,
    crying acidic tears

    Asphyxiated earth
    plead hope to grow,
    defend endangered love
    and Never let this go.

  • Kenny
    15 years ago

    Can I have "Breathe" please? thank you!

  • Twisted Heart
    15 years ago

    I'd like Breathe too. Thanks

  • Twisted Heart
    15 years ago

    Breathe

    A shutter of a heartbeat
    Slowly thumping in the night
    Restless dreams awaken
    Up in the tainted sky
    Forever fates to wander
    Among the moonless waste
    A moment there in passing
    Broke soul is now encased.

    No breath to pull from heartache
    No oceans lapping shores
    When minds are left to wonder
    Of dreams that are no more
    Take hold the wreakage lying
    On the heart that's left to bleed
    Draw up the failing courage
    And....

    Breathe

  • Sole
    15 years ago

    Until Tomorrow please.

  • kira2
    15 years ago

    Can I please have
    Until Tomorrow
    Breathe
    That's what you get

  • HOLLYWOODxBANGBANG
    15 years ago

    Kira, sorry but Until Tomorrow and Breathe are already full. I will reserve you for That's What You Get

  • Kenny
    15 years ago

    BREATHE

    Wrapped within your tender arms

    Providing warmth to my saddened soul

    Hypnotized within your delicate charms

    A love ensured to be concrete and whole

    As your heart's beat reverberates

    And maiden voice echoing to my presence

    Like an eternal river flowing with fate

    Living our carefree, affectionate essence

    If the rain would storm us in surprise

    And burden would spear us desperately

    Don't let the spark fade within your eyes

    Grasp our soaring hope with your faith tightly

    Soon a rainbow will be drawn across from a mile

    And we'll escape from the world's bitter old strife

    So enchant your ivory face with a lovable smile

    I breathe infinitely. . . . .

    For I have finally found the air of my life

    The air will be forever "You".

  • Courageous Dreamer
    15 years ago

    Never Let This Go.

    Memories so vivid from an unforgettable past,
    every word carefully spoken with tender affection,
    made us dance eternally, melting like ice cubes.

    I'll never let the memories fade.

    Your hands like silk that laid upon my glowing skin,
    delicate lips that kissed me from time and time again,
    left imprints so that your presence was remembered.

    I'll never let the memories fade.

    A special love that bloomed so beautifully like a flower,
    injected scarlet roses into our souls as a reminder;
    each symbolizing every "i love you" expressed.

    I'll never let the memories fade.

    How you held my face as if it were fragile with your fingertips,
    leaning in for the magical touch in which left me in heaven,
    making my heart skip a beat as you gave me warmth.

    I'll never let the memories fade.

    Your name is stitched within along with these memories,
    they'll remain with me for the rest of my life, forever,
    as I'll continuously look back at the moments shared.

    I'll never let go of these memories.

  • Poet on the Piano
    15 years ago

    Perfect

    Faultless,
    Made not to sin,
    But to dissipate love,
    Through even rage of countless wars,
    May His word flow freely like calm waters.
    A fervent passion of great care,
    Inflicted upon all,
    A God so great,
    Faultless.

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    Rictameter~

    A rictameter is a nine line poetry form. The 1st and
    last lines are the same with the syllable count as follows:

    line 1 - 2 syllables - same as line 9
    line 2 - 4 syllables
    line 3 - 6 syllables
    line 4 - 8 syllables
    line 5 - 10 syllables
    line 6 - 8 syllables
    line 7 - 6 syllables
    line 8 - 4 syllables
    line 9 - 2 syllables - same as line 1

  • NyellMoonlight
    15 years ago

    For a Pessimist, I'm Pretty Optimistic

    by NyellMoonlight

    Scarlet were the words spilled tonight,
    sublime despite my luscious perfume-
    entwined scent of lilac and deliberating mistrust.

    Addictive, the sound of cyan voice;
    almost mythical, the way you
    portray the sentences with monsters;

    optimistically, I nodded.

    Life must go on,
    but you're not
    my hero anymore.

  • kira2
    15 years ago

    BREATHE

    This day when I wake I breathe
    But it is not good breath I’m afraid
    Feels empty, non-life supporting
    Shallow, grey and dead

    Then I realize that you are there
    Beside me, part of me
    Your eyes penetrate
    I look at you and really see

    The love, caring and passion
    You say, “breathe, baby, breathe”
    I smile and inhale deeply
    So good when you’re with me

    All it takes is you near
    A moment, an hour a day
    And all is suddenly clear
    I can breathe, I know the way

    All is well in the world
    All is well in my head
    All is well with you in my life
    Inside, I no longer feel dead

    Breathe air
    Breathe love
    Breathe life
    Breathe desire
    Breathe passion
    Breathe pure

  • kira2
    15 years ago

    Oops - I just realized that you said 2 per title.
    sorry....

  • kira2
    15 years ago

    That's What you Get:

    Why are you so cruel
    You don't acknowledge me
    I am invisible to you
    You don't even see me

    When you went away I was true
    True to your wishes, your ways
    Did what you wanted, what you expected
    Did everything, for you, for us each day

    You returned from the war place
    Seemingly sound, none the worse for ware
    But within days of your arrival
    It seemed obvious that you no longer cared

    Why, what happened
    Was it living your narcissistic life?
    Thinking only of yourself
    Forgetting you had kids and a wife

    I called each day to fill you in
    On what you were missing
    You seemed so distracted
    As if you were reminiscing

    Now you are back
    To a new home, new town,
    More than a year later
    And I feel worn down

    Tired of the loneliness
    Look at me - I did not die
    I'm ready to be loved
    "I am here!" I cry

    I will let another love me
    You, I will forget
    I will not waste my love on you
    You are not worthy - That's what you get!

  • Teria
    15 years ago

    I'll take: I caught myself

  • Teria
    15 years ago

    I caught myself staring awkwardly in a daze
    Freezing the movements that were already still

    I found myself blinking away at the moments
    Turning to mush as if I were solid before-hand

    I seen myself burning in a fiery hell
    Pushing past demons as if I never knew them

    You've caught me staring straight at the sun
    Melting the moments that were already gone

    You found me blinking in a never ending pattern
    Turning the words around as if they were to hurt someone

    And, you seen me burning in a fiery hell
    Pushing past demons as if you weren't one of them

    ... I caught myself this time,
    falling too fast.
    But it'll never happen again,
    because my past is my past.

  • HOLLYWOODxBANGBANG
    15 years ago

    This is now closed, I will have the results up in a day or two. Thanks to all entrants, can't wait to read 'em! :)

  • HOLLYWOODxBANGBANG
    15 years ago

    I just want to say thanks to all who entered, they were all really good reads. It took me a lot of deliberation and head-scratching to get to these results..

    1. The Optimist/ The Pessimist by We Will Make Our Own Music [10 comments + votes]
    2. For a Pessimist, I'm Pretty Optimistic by Nyell Moonlight [5 comments + votes]
    3. Perfect (I'm Amazed by You) by xToBeWithYoux [3 comments + votes]
    Honorable Mention: Never Let This Go by Temps [2 comments + votes]

    Please PM me the titles that you would like me to read.

  • NyellMoonlight
    15 years ago

    Thanks for the placing &
    Congrats to the winners.

  • Inside the Liar
    15 years ago

    Congrats winners!

  • xToBeWithYoux
    15 years ago

    Thank you for the placing, and congrats everybody! :)

  • Courageous Dreamer
    15 years ago

    Congrats to the winners!
    & Thank you for the Honorable mention :]

  • Kenny
    15 years ago

    Congrats to all! ^^,