Song Title Poem Challenge

  • Krista
    14 years ago

    ======UPDATE======
    My friend passed away this last Saturday, and I just really need some time. I'm extending the deadline to July 3rd. Please understand my action. Thank you. Continue entering poems...They've been great so far. :)
    Deadline: July 3

    Rules:
    No or little profanity, please.
    Not too long of a poem. :)
    Not too short either.
    Rhyming is optional.
    Use any form you feel fit for the poem.
    Have fun!

    Prizes:
    1st- Nomination and 3 comments and a favorite.
    2nd- 2 comments.
    3rd & Honorable Mention- 1 comment.

    Titles:
    (All these songs are from Linkin Park. :) )

    Valentine's Day
    -xXxemzxXx(Reserved)
    -xToBeWithYou(Reserved)
    -

    My December(FULL)
    -Steady Now (Done)
    -Cayce (Done)
    -Lilium(Reserved)

    Wake(FULL)
    -Steady Now (Done)
    -Call Me Broken (Done)
    -Colm Ace of Trumps (Reserved)

    Breaking the Habit(FULL)
    -xXxemzxXx (Done)
    -Call Me Broken (Done)
    -Colm Ace of Trumps (Reserved

    Have fun! 2 Poems per person, 3 people per poem.

  • Poet on the Piano
    14 years ago

    I will take "Wake" and "My December" please and thank you!

  • Poet on the Piano
    14 years ago

    My December~Monchielle

    My pleasant December,
    Oh, how I greatly miss,
    The dreams you brought alive,
    Creating harmony,
    That shall forever thrive.

    My pleasant December,
    If only you realized,
    The merriment expressed,
    To all playful children,
    You would live without rest.

    My pleasant December,
    How I cherish your month,
    Though I must wait so long,
    It is worth all my time,
    In your love I belong.

    My pleasant December,
    Never shall one day pass,
    Where I won't crave your touch,
    For my hope has nourished,
    Thank you so very much.

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    The Monchielle is a poem that consists of four five-line stanzas where the first line repeats in
    each verse. Each line within the stanzas consist of six syllables, and lines three and five rhyme.
    The rhyme pattern is Abcdc Aefgf Ahiji Aklml.

  • Poet on the Piano
    14 years ago

    Wake~Tanka

    Arise from this curse,
    oh princess of the valley
    Slumber no longer
    suffocates your weary life.
    You are free, now seek revenge.

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    The Tanka is a form of Japanese poetry that consists of the
    following syllables: 5, 7, 5, 7, 7.

    Thanks to Ingrid for a correction!

  • xXxemzxXx
    14 years ago

    Hey can i have breaking the habbit & valentines day please?

  • xXxemzxXx
    14 years ago

    Breaking The Habbit

    I say ill stop
    Tell myself its true
    But we both know
    I wont make it through

    Give it a week or so
    Then it will begin again
    Tell me how
    You could posibly think of me as sane

    One cut maybe two
    Thats not enough
    Maybe three or four
    Its not my fault times get tough

    Im trying hard
    I need to
    But it isnt easy
    Other people probably struggle too

    Breaking the habbit
    I know i can
    Breaking the habbit
    I'll never do it again...

  • Kimberley
    14 years ago

    Breaking The Habit please. Thanks.

  • Kimberley
    14 years ago

    Breaking The Habit

    You're my drug and I'm addicted to you,
    You pull me in with the things you do,
    I should know better, you're no good for me,
    But saying goodbye isn't a possibility.

    And you're like a bad habit, impossible to break,
    With your iron hold that I cannot shake,
    And everyday I say I'll be strong,
    But that mindset doesn't last long.

    And I today,
    I'm breaking the habit,
    Yes I say,
    I'm breaking the habit,
    Today.

    ~KM~

  • Kimberley
    14 years ago

    I think I will take 'Wake' as well. thanks.

  • xToBeWithYoux
    14 years ago

    Can I have Valentine's Day please? Thanks :)

  • BlueEyedMystery
    14 years ago

    My December [Take Me Back]

    Taste the heat,
    fire on my tongue.
    Blazing.
    Burning.
    Dying in my lungs.
    End the hell
    of smiles
    and sand.
    I can't relive this.
    [Oh, yes you can.]
    December's dead.
    It floated away
    on snow-filled clouds
    and Santa's sleigh.
    Oh, please,
    oh, please,
    just take me back.
    Numb my heart,
    forever black.

    I want to..

    fall into winter,
    let summer drown.
    I'm the Ice Queen.
    Where's my crown?
    December, December,
    forever mine.
    Take me back
    and let me shine.

  • Hallo A Lilium
    14 years ago

    Can I have My December?
    Please And Thank You.

  • xToBeWithYoux
    14 years ago

    (I posted this as a proper poem so I changed the title, as I couldn't just call it Valentine's Day, now could I? :D)

    The Song Of Valentine's Day

    In the silence, they can hear
    the cherubs calling their names,
    their melodies ringing
    in the walls of a lover's paradise.

    Silk sheets envelop
    the festivity of the day,
    radiating warmth from
    tranquil partners.

    Panoramic views
    of the capital of romance
    beckon weary eyes
    from the bed to the balcony.

    A frail, scarlet petal
    loses its precious grip,
    after the rose shivered
    in the icy February breeze.

    Gifts and delicate ribbons
    litter the edge of the artists' canvas.
    Their contents chased down
    with France's finest champagne.

    The stars throw light
    onto the joyous world,
    as it celebrates, parties,
    weeps, reminisces.

    The cherubs' harmony
    echoes throughout the sleeping city.
    Entwined hearts have exclusive company
    of the song of Valentine's Day.

  • Hallo A Lilium
    14 years ago

    Sorry for the late entry.

    Title: The Tears Of My Angel's December.
    Poet: Lilium

    The solitude confines me in a wintry cage,
    I'm left with snowflakes to wash away my fears.
    A silent flourish of my melted haven.
    Basking in the ambiance of the angel's white tears.

    I'll protect you this December as the wind cries,
    Do not fret for tonight I'll wipe your eyes.
    Softly you whimper, but I wrap you in a tight embrace,
    Dear angel of mine I'll kiss the pain away.

    My December is a worship for I found you with a sad face.
    Smile little darling for my warmth will be your saving grace.

  • Curing the Comon Cliche
    14 years ago

    Title: Valentine Cards

    Just another sad character
    Crying till her plot twist
    She's writing in the corner
    Valentine cards on her wrist

    Writing out her tears
    A twisted valentine
    Mocking valentines etched on her wrists
    Crimson ink, "be mine?"

    Twisted mocking valentines
    Screaming in red ink
    Eyes release the coldest tears
    Every time she blinks

    Eyes release the coldest tears
    The tears come falling down
    No, the tears aren't falling
    They're crashing to the ground

    Write another thought out
    Another valentine
    On her wrist in violent red
    Crimson valentine design

    It's not even Valentine's Day
    Mid-May April Fools
    Valentine's is for finding love
    Love doesn't follow any rules

    April fools
    He won't love her back
    Those lines on her wrists
    Match the hearts little cracks

    He doesn't know that,
    Let's call "him" Bill,
    She wishes he'd like her
    But he never will

    Here's that plot twist
    Bill likes her a lot
    He was gonna tell her yesterday
    But I guess Bill forgot

    Bill made up his mind
    3 o'clock last night
    Hes gonna tell her tomorrow
    At morning's first light
    ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~DAWN~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
    Bill is at her house
    Mom says she's in her room
    Bill wonders if he should tell her
    Or would that be too soon

    Bill does it on an impulse
    Creaks open that door
    Valentine cards spilled across the room
    Broken hearts can't bleed anymore