silvershoes
13 years ago
Hellon aka Miss Take has volunteered one of her poems for analysis. Please add your comments, be they compliments or constructive criticism or explanations for how the poem affected you. Respond in any way you see fit. |
silvershoes
13 years ago
I couldn't make sense of this part: |
silvershoes
13 years ago
"Petals plucked at random, from scattered stems," |
Nicko
13 years ago
An enjoyable read |
silvershoes
13 years ago
You have question marks everywhere else where one is warranted... so why not there? |
silvershoes
13 years ago
I don't think that line needs any question marks actually! |
abracadabra
13 years ago
This is quite lovely. I think formed poetry is best when its form is not even noticed. I thought this poem was free until I spotted certain uncertain lines. I then discovered your shadow poetry explanation and it made sense. But that is no excuse for having weird lines that are lying awkwardly and tainting your sweet poem. I am going to point out the places that gave you away. |