Noura's Contest :)

  • nouriguess
    12 years ago

    Hello, guys! :)

    This is my first contest outside my club and other than the forums, the general forums, y'know. :)
    I'm going to give you titles, some of them are song titles, and some are given by me. You can choose up to three titles, and write poems about them.

    The rules:

    - The title given should be the title of your poem.
    - No rhymes.
    - Each participant can reserve three titles.
    - Four poets per title.
    - Be creative. ;)

    Deadline: 15th Nov.

    Have fun! :D

    The Titles:

    * Sparks Fly -by- Taylor Swift

    - Jeremy S Farley

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    -

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    * Come in With the Rain -by- Taylor Swift

    - Lebanese Phoenix

    - Everlasting

    - Lofallenve

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    * Love You Like a Love Song -by Selena Gomez

    - Everlasting

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    -

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    * Piece of Me -by- Brittney Spears

    - Tara-Kay Randal

    - Jeremy S Farley

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    * It's Not Goodbye -by- Laura Pausini

    - Jessie

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    * Since You've Been Gone -by- Kelly Clarkson

    - Jessie

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    * Wake Me Up When September Ends -by- Green Day

    - Lebanese Phoenix

    - Jessie 2

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    * Wisemen -by- James Blunt

    - dollwithafrown

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    * Two For Tragedy -by- NightWish

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    -

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    Titles given by me:

    * You Look Like April

    - Lofallenve

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    -

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    * Unconcsiously
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    -

    -

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    * Loosely Strapped Onto Your Fate

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    -

    -

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    * Bleeding Distance

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    -

    -

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    * Lonely When it Comes to Love

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    -

    -

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    * Too Honest For Me

    - Britt

    - Jessie

    - dollwithafrown

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    * Hello, Rainbows

    - Tara-Kay Randal

    - Jessie 2

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    -Jeremy S Farley

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    Do not forget that contests are only for fun, not for winning. ;) If anyone has any suggestions, please post here.

    Love you all.

    Noura.

  • Decayed
    12 years ago

    Come in with the rain :)

    and..

    wake me up when September ends :)

  • nouriguess
    12 years ago

    Reserved!

  • Tara Kay
    12 years ago

    Hello, Rainbows

    and

    Piece Of Me

  • nouriguess
    12 years ago

    You always look for originality, you smart you.

  • Britt
    12 years ago

    Too Honest For Me.

    Can we post the poems to our account once we put it in here?

  • nouriguess
    12 years ago

    Yes, you can, beautiful lady.

  • Britt
    12 years ago

    ;) Thanks!

  • L
    12 years ago

    Love you like a love song.

    and

    since you've been gone. ^_^

  • Lofallenve
    12 years ago

    Can I reserve "come in with the rain"? :)

  • Jess
    12 years ago

    It's Not Goodbye
    Since You've Been Gone
    And To Honest For Me

    Pleaseee AndThanks :D

  • Amreen
    12 years ago

    .

  • nouriguess
    12 years ago

    All reserved. Amreen, what did you want to reserve, lol?

  • dollwithafrown
    12 years ago

    "Wisemen" and "Too Honest for Me", please. :)

  • nouriguess
    12 years ago

    You got it!

  • Decayed
    12 years ago

    PM them to you?
    or post them herE?

  • nouriguess
    12 years ago

    Post them herE. x)

  • Jess
    12 years ago

    Too Honest For Me~
    Byyy, Jessi :D

    You say you are broken,

    You say I was your everything.

    I'm sorry, I'm so sorry.

    I never meant to hurt you,

    never wanted to see you cry.

    I never wanted this,

    A relationship so simple, so perfect.

    I've never been the type of girl,

    to stick around for long.

    I've always been a women on the run,

    you don't fit in to my heart.

    I'm sorry, once again,

    your too honest for me.

  • Lofallenve
    12 years ago

    Actually can I switch to "You look like April?"

    You Look Like April

    When I first had the pleasure
    of meeting your kindred spirit,
    It didn't matter how hard you tried to conceal it,
    The fake flowers of April,
    could not hide the blizzards of December.
    As your russet eyes gazed down in mine,
    I witnessed a battle of anguish, of despair,
    behind your unshed tears.
    In those moments you
    would paint on a smile
    and pretend everything was all right.
    With that painted smile,
    you tried to hide the effects
    of the blizzards of December.
    It was your best attempt I knew;
    still I could not be fooled.
    The days had gone by,
    still you held true to your fake flowers of April.
    I would hold you in my arms,
    even when you felt you didn't need me.
    I stayed in your world,
    even if you felt it best you leave me.
    But as these days continue forward,
    I witness your ice melting.
    It is like the first signs of spring,
    the first warmth of the sun,
    The flowers that surrounded you,
    that were a false image of the true beauty,
    Grew into something real,
    grew into something beautiful.
    I can look into your russet eyes today
    and I can honestly say:
    "The blizzards of December may have had their way,
    But underneath all of the ice,
    you are starting to look like April."

  • Jessie
    12 years ago

    Wake me up when september ends
    and hello rainbows please

  • Tara Kay
    12 years ago

    Here you are Noura, The first one:

    Piece Of Me

    I search my sheltered carriage
    for a missing puzzle piece,
    clutching at memories
    painted on the cardboard scene,
    and I search amidst the open
    window, for a star
    amongst the darkened night
    to wish I never had to dream.
    Yet I still search within my
    enshrouded soul for a glimpse
    of euphoria however simple it seems,
    but
    I will never give up searching
    for a forgotten piece of me.

    © Tara-Kay Randall 1st November 2011

  • nouriguess
    12 years ago

    I've loved the poems, guys, so far. Lofallenve, you want to add 'You Look Like April'? or you only want to reserve this title? :)

  • Tara Kay
    12 years ago

    Edit: I'm still thinking

  • L
    12 years ago

    Love you like a love song

    Mischievous thoughts amidst my mind;
    As I gaze to see your face, with plain expression,
    while wasting your time with random songs.

    My mind ventured with intentions of tickling your belly
    to make you laugh nonstop until you exercise
    the muscles on your abdomen.

    My fingers were already moving preparing to warm up
    My legs were waiting for their next step
    as they awaited for their turn to come ahead.
    My shoulders felt tense from just hoping to not be notice.
    My eyes resembled someone ambitious with a dollar sign on each eye
    but my dollar sign was none other than your pearly white smile.

    When my turn to make my next move approached
    my heart fell prostrate for it was beating faster than a continuously stroking drum from all the unwanted tension accumulated by my risky intention.

    When my ears heard your melodious voice
    singing a love song, I felt how cupids arrow entered throughout my entire heart leaving me with you encrusted in my life. Ever since that day, I love you like a love song the one you sung when mischievous thoughts abounded my mind.

    Lol..Noura, I just wanted to write about : love you like a love song and since you've been gone.
    But I guess, I can do my last poem on come in with the rain.

  • nouriguess
    12 years ago

    You want to add it, Luce?

    No more changing titles on here, guys, if you want to switch your title, PM me, don't post here please. :) Because I'm a bit confused, now. lol.

  • Lofallenve
    12 years ago

    I just want "You look like April."
    No inspiration so far for "come in with the rain." :(

  • nouriguess
    12 years ago

    It is ok. You can reserve the title you want, and if it's about inspiration, maybe listen to the song, it will inspire you, or just write what you feel by reading the title. Take your time, you still have 12 days, lots of time. :)

    Everything is under control, so far! PHEW.

  • L
    12 years ago

    --- -- Since you've been gone. ---

    Since you've been gone
    My mind has been flooded with
    worriedly and vague thoughts.

    Queries mailed to my head sent from every single nerve cell.
    Where has he gone? They asked right away.
    Why did he go without saying what was wrong?

    I set for to investigate this mysterious departure
    I checked my mail with hope to see some signal
    but there is no clue, I walked from here and there.
    Looking for a slight sign that could lead me
    to your whereabouts.

    Until I decided to leave this case to the experts
    while I looked back on ours memories.

    I remember when it was just you, my laptop and me.
    The perfect teammates. The unbreakable group.

    I realize you were my distraction,
    my stress reliever, my fort that protected me from wrong doings,
    and the one I could got to whenever everyone left.

    You took me to different places; from America to Asia.
    To visit Argentina and India, Australia and Japan, All over the world.

    You taught me many words,
    to meet people with different backgrounds and views,
    and to see what lies beyond my home.

    But when I was ready to learn and absorb more
    you left, leaving me stranded in this empty room
    Like a beautiful flower that dries up when its source of water dissipates.

    I'll never forget that your were the one who taught me how to surf
    to fight every single wave that cross my path,
    But you were there next to me giving me access to freedom
    And now, you left me with this tsunami that restricts me access to searching the unknown.

    I ponder on my actions, what did I do wrong?
    I know you started to show an strange attitude
    First, you were playing hide and seek
    then, you disappeared for a while
    and now, I haven't hear from you in so long.

    When will you come back?
    to form once again our team, the old good trio.
    You, my laptop and me.

    P.s. Can you guess to whom or to what is this dedicated to?

    A special thanks to felicity for inspiring me with one of her poems.

    Edit : The poem is call plastic eyes.

  • nouriguess
    12 years ago

    *slipps to Felicity's profile* lol.

  • Decayed
    12 years ago

    "Inspiration"

    At last,
    I've found you.

    But I would rather
    see you caving
    in with sunshine,
    through my open
    window pane.

    Or
    why not creep
    through my daydreams
    and working hours,
    or through the tip of my
    ball-point pen
    and vacant A4 papers?

    You always have to
    come out of the blue,
    uninvited,
    when thunder blazes
    my nights,
    and the howling winds
    cut the electricity off?

    You have to terrify me
    with a bloody facade?

    At least,
    the next time you decide
    to visit me,
    make sure not to come in
    with the stout rains,

    for my poems need no
    dampness, anyway..

  • Lofallenve
    12 years ago

    Awwwh, glad I could inspire that poem. :3

  • L
    12 years ago

    Come in with the rain.

    Right at the end of the river's stream
    hangs a trapped rock amidst the valley.
    Left with dry, vague, clueless thoughts
    and no resources to move from its obstruction.

    Hence, come in with the rain
    Thousand of drops of water;
    to flood this gorge with thoughts of inspiration,
    To clear that rock, and to fill it with imagination.

    Free that river from its obstruction
    let it flow with easiness;
    to rise stronger and to run like a gazelle:
    light, fast and free to create only master pieces.

  • Tara Kay
    12 years ago

    Hello, Rainbows

    I once found the colours kaleidoscopic amidst the sky,
    although they never sheltered their existence within
    my broken soul,

    or did they in a time long forgotten?

    For not once were my words humble enough to
    represent a dream of diamond glistening rivers
    flowing underneath a wooden planked bridge
    or even a rocky mountain path leading to heaven's
    open gate

    however much I try and recall a memory
    in which I can relate my mind falls blank
    of the parchment I write amidst the
    neurotic imagery I portray.

    I once found the kaleidoscope of colours
    glistening behind the trees,
    I once whispered "Hello", but they never
    whispered back to me,
    or maybe they did, but I have long forgotten
    the times long ago.

    © Tara-Kay Randall
    November 2011

  • nouriguess
    12 years ago

    ^Really loving the poems, guys. Amazing work.

  • Jeremy S Farley
    12 years ago

    I would like to try my hand at "Sparks Fly", "Peice of Me", and "Hello Rainbows". I really like the work I've seen so far by the way.

  • nouriguess
    12 years ago

    Reserved!

  • Jeremy S Farley
    12 years ago

    "Sparks Fly"

    Spewed forth from the fires of industry
    Volcanic river flows endlessly as
    The furnace rages and
    The pistons hammer. Ceaseless,

    Steam engine churning
    In blinding arc and weld-track scars
    soldiers are born from the mold.
    Their vaporous birth cries blue grey

    Forged by will in raining embers.
    Sparks fly as pawns change form
    Molded to the masters purpose
    An army of iron marches dutifully

    So like them we are
    Labled, stamped, and formed in ranks.
    Cast into the human sea
    All parts of the great machine.

    Fulfilling the dreams of gods

  • Jeremy S Farley
    12 years ago

    "Hello Rainbows"

    The battlefield is now silent.
    Too cold for crow or raven.
    Multicolored lights ripple the northern sky,
    And in the dead silence,
    A fallen warrior lies bleeding
    Red into the trampled snow.
    Awaiting his lives reward.

    Seven foes he'd slain that day.
    He chuckles with what strength is left.
    More than fifty in his life.
    Oh how the All-Father must smile on him.
    Oh what tales would be told.
    For he had lived well.

    No oath broken,
    Nor fear in battle.
    The maiden descends
    Clothed in rainbow,
    Comforting.
    Every mans dream.

    Adoringly she beckons.
    Cloaked in color, swirling.
    Come to claim her champion.
    Her kiss only for the brave.
    His sacrifice rewarded
    As he dies in her caress.

    She bears him cross the northern sky.
    The valkery ascends ever higher,
    Across the rainbow yule hunt path
    To the land of feast and glory.
    Where only the brave may tread.
    To the hall of golden shields.

  • nouriguess
    12 years ago

    Loving it, so far, guys.
    You still have 8 days. Work your brains.

  • Decayed
    12 years ago

    Wake Me Up When September Ends

    Cry me a river,
    for tears can
    halt those trembles
    and shivers
    upon your knees.

    And if you feel
    the world is crumbling,
    right beneath your feet,
    and the voices
    of torment looming
    against your heart beats,

    come running
    with the winds of tomorrow,
    and I'll dwindle
    your heaps of sorrow
    as you cry
    upon my shoulder
    and sleep an eternity...

    perhaps nothing could
    ever wake you up,
    even when September ends.