Comments : Active Depression

  • 16 years ago

    by Baby Rainbow

    This is excellent well done xxxx

  • 16 years ago

    by Not Bulletproof

    You've always been such a brilliant writer. take care doll. xo.

    --Sarah

  • 15 years ago

    by Nee

    Amazinngggg piece
    I'm depressed right now And have been like this for the past few days, I know this isnt helping but I wanted a powerful piece and I found it in yours =]]
    great job on this, I hope you will return to write more amazing stuffs =)
    rock on !! xx

  • 15 years ago

    by Once an Angel

    God, that was breath-taking. You are very elequant with your words. You have an amazing capasity to create poetry that embodies some of the strongest and most difficult emotions to communication.

  • 12 years ago

    by Glenn G

    You have prepared this poem so well that I can taste my death. I can't wait.

    • 11 years ago

      by Rolo

      Please dont say such things. life is brilliant if you can just realize that nothing really matters except for finding your bliss. And your bliss already exists...you are just being distracted away from your natural state...

  • 11 years ago

    by Lucy

    Like all your poems this is brilliant, love the rhyme and flow and words. So beautiful.

  • 11 years ago

    by ShhhhItsASecret©

    This poem is very sad, but well written. The flow is smooth and the emotion is felt by the reader. You have created such a wonderful piece of literature. Great job!