Where Have You Gone?

by silvershoes   May 6, 2008


Tingles slide down my spine
Pinpricks and soft touches
When your eyes meet mine, but
You hesitate
You could keep our contact
Or let the moment fall as
You turn your back
On me
Again

I tried to reach, I wanted to
I would give them up for you
I know at some point
You felt the way I do
The rush inside, I know you felt
Falling head first in love
Did you change your mind?

Over and over you told me that
Nothing could change the way
Over and over you told me there
Was nothing I could say
But I am here
Alone
Tell me, where are you?
And I am here
Alone
Tell me, where have you gone?
I need to know
I need to know

Heading home in my Cherokee
I wish that you were here
Sitting in the passenger side
Holding my hand tight
There is nothing I'd change in you
There's nothing I don't love
Is it possible you feel the same?

Over and over you told me that
Nothing could change the way
Over and over you told me there
Was nothing I could say
But I am here
Alone
Tell me, where are you?
And I am here
Alone
Where is it you've gone?
I need to know
Where have you gone?
I need to know

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  • 13 years ago

    by Sunshine

    Woowoohhhoooo what a start...LOVED it..yahh.

    Over and over you told me that
    Nothing could change the way
    Over and over you told me there
    Was nothing I could say
    >>was nothing for me to say (better)

    But I am here
    >>>all on my own; rather than (alone) since u used it in the following lines..right?
    Tell me, where are you?
    And I am here
    Alone
    Tell me, where have you gone?
    I need to know
    I need to know

    Over and over you told me that
    Nothing could change the way
    Over and over you told me there
    >>Was nothing for me to say (changed)
    But I am here
    all on my own (changed from alone)
    Tell me, where are you?
    And I am here
    Alone
    Where is it you've gone?
    I need to know
    Where have you gone?
    I need to know

    >>> im sorry for my suggestions..its ur poem u can just ignore..and ur poem..mygod let me talk about ur opening lines...flowed SO well..and rhymed !!tho a free verse
    how amazing

    and the poem it self..REally REally sad..the repetition just shows a burn in the heart

    I loved it
    5/5

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