I Am With You

by Sourav   May 7, 2008


Sky is grey, and nothing is true
But you don't worry I'm with you
Night is too dark and light is too dim
You can't but I can hear the scream
But don't worry I'm with you

Faded dried grass, no tinge of green
You've achieved anything but serene
Someday you'll be dying with your blue
But don't worry I'm with you

Cut down trees, wiped out plants
In this murky world, you're busy with your slants
And time is short; you'll get no time to rue
But not alone; here I'm with you

You're going towards complete annihilation
And in this blind time, there's total misconception
You are crossing the limit and going through
And with my inarticulate mind I'm going with you

Playing with the nature, frozen by your thoughts
Birds stop chirping as rivers shrink to distraught
The world is changing like it never used to
But happy in our own world, me and you

Warm breeze blows in this smoky earth
Evolution long forgot the right progressive path
When this madness will break the wall & nothing to be viewed
By clinging your hands, I'll whisper - I'm with you

So the sky is grey and days are few
I'm with this race I'm with you
A night will come then there'll be no sun
We will be dancing together in the dying fun
Time will halt to say - now this is true
As we don't deserve to be here, we'll get our due.

3


Did You Like This Poem?

Latest Comments

  • 15 years ago

    by Always and Never

    "A night will come then there'll be no sun
    We will be dancing together in the dying fun
    Time will halt to say - now this is true
    As we don't deserve to be here, we'll get our due"

    this stanza had me, i was reading and not really following it, then i read this and had to reread everything, and i agree with every other comment(if there good) that this is an excellent, well put together poem. I'm all about nature, and we are killing it. but like you said, we will get our due. AWESOME 5/5

  • 15 years ago

    by Trinity

    Not the sort of poem that would usually grab my attention but you've written it in such a way that it really captivates anyone who chances across it.
    Absolutey brilliant.
    Love how you've kept the theme flowing through out by using different ways to repeat the same message: "I'm with you"

  • 15 years ago

    by shamvi

    Love it loads.. it's so sweet

  • 15 years ago

    by dandelion

    I really liked this a lot..and hey.. I added you 2 my favorites!! God bless!

  • 15 years ago

    by Cindy

    What a very sad picture your words paint.

    Faded dried grass, no tinge of green
    You've achieved anything but serene
    Someday you'll be dying with your blue
    But don't worry I'm with you

    This brings tears to my eyes. You have done a great job on this. How we are killing our Earth :)
    Take Care Cindy

More Poems By Sourav