Comments : I love you (sonnet)

  • 9 years ago

    by Courageous Dreamer

    This poem definatly painted the most beautiful scene in my mind. It was a very cute poem. You did a excellent job expressing your feelings. Great work. 5/5.

  • 9 years ago

    by Michelle18

    Awwwww thats sweet.. i like this poem.. it relaxed me lol.. i think you did a great job.. the flow wasnt off at all.. good job with this one.5/5

  • 9 years ago

    by Michael D Nalley

    This oem is very beautifuly written an but to be just a breese. word choice and theme is very romantic

  • 9 years ago

    by InvisiblyHeartless

    I loved this. the tone was soft and romantic. it sounded so real and sweet. i have to say that a couple of rhymes sounded perfect but a few others were iffy. but the wording was great and the style and flow was absuolutely fantastic.
    loved it!!!!!

    Lexie

  • 9 years ago

    by Gooberz

    You know how i paint pretty picture's there nice job 5/5

  • 9 years ago

    by Justin

    I agree with the others... this is like somthing you'd write to your girlfriend heh =D Very passionate in your word choice =D overall great job

  • 9 years ago

    by Cayce

    Okay, your rhymes seemed a little forced, which messed up the flow for me. Also, your words were simple and didn't really catch my interest. Everything you said I've heard before in another love poem. I don't really like love poems at all though, so I might be being a little picky. For me to like one, it has to be very creative, original, something I haven't read millions of times. I can tell you really love the person you're talking about, though and I bet they'd love this poem a lot. It was decent, just not breath taking. I hope my comment wasn't too harsh. I don't like being mean... ><

    Keep writing!
    Cayce

  • 9 years ago

    by David

    Short and sweet, and full of love. very sensitive with loads of the words having a very exotic and loving meaning to them. the imagery was very vivid and i thought i could feel and hear and taste everything that this poem had. well done.

    bravo! 5/5 David

  • 9 years ago

    by Jiyaa

    What a romantic poem Fsams. I loved the way it is written and I dont know why it is unfairly rated. I mean its so romantic and up to the mark as far as romantic poetry is concerned.

    Hats off!

  • 9 years ago

    by Jiyaa

    What a romantic poem Fsams. I loved the way it is written and I dont know why it is unfairly rated. I mean its so romantic and up to the mark as far as romantic poetry is concerned.

    Hats off!

  • 9 years ago

    by WrittenInTheStars

    Beautifully written. Although I'm not a pro on the structure of sonnets it looked good enough to me. I love this poem, it made me tear up a bit. Whoever you've written this about is a lucky person. 5/5

  • 9 years ago

    by Goth marionette

    What a sweet poem!!..This is so romantic and nice...It's beautifully written and the rhyme rocked..
    Good job,keep it up5/5...

  • 9 years ago

    by Hebe

    What a beautiful poem!
    The rhyming is perfect, like your word choice. Very romantic of course.
    This one touched me deep. Haven't read a love poem for a while.. you did a very good job here!
    Take care

    5/5

  • 9 years ago

    by StefQ

    First of all very nice and cute poem, the words match and everything flows great. But in this line :
    "I wish if I was the lucky breeze
    The breeze that touches your cheeks"
    I think the "If" should be "that". Other then this good sonnet, loved it ! Especially the end!

  • 9 years ago

    by Annaam

    Woww....
    This is really sweet and quite well-written! :)

    5/5. 8)