Wonderful work here, I don't know why no one else has commented on this, seriously. Your poems really spple out to me and take my breath away. Your style in your poems are outstanding, and your word choice flowed and set the scene perfectly. The descriptions and emotions in this piece was immense, and I love this so much. Good work, 5/5 from me. Keep writing, always and forever...

Very nice work...you've captured this moment so well and so precisely; with maturity, which is often what these types of poems lack. So congrats, a good read!

Chin up, Eleni