My Heart Died Fast [Triquatrain]

by Twisted Heart   Nov 4, 2008


My heart died fast, love didn't last
Faith fell inside my mind
All hope was lost, my soul the cost
No light inside to find

Against the night, gave up the fight
No hold to ransom here
Drifts now in seas, the pain in me
As oceans fill with tears.

The darkened pool, holds now this fool
As one who'll never know
The heart turned dark, no lasting spark
To lighten up and grow.

So now I sit, inside this pit
Where love was cast away
No longer seen, no place to lean
Forever and a day.
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Triquatrain
The Triquatrain form was created by Robert L. Huntsman. It is a quatrain poem in tri-rhyme
with a specific rhyming pattern (see below). Lines 1 and 3 have internal rhyme whereas lines 2
and 4 do not.

Rhyme Pattern:

(a,a)
b
(c,c)
b

(d,d)
e
(f,f)
e

(g,g)
h
(i,i)
h

. . . and so on.

The groupings in the parenthesis are on one line separated by a comma. This poem can be of
any length or subject and does not require perfect meter.

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  • 15 years ago

    by Cindy

    Jeannie
    What a very sad piece. You did an awesome job on this challenge.
    Love Cindy