Suicide

by Cookiiee   Nov 28, 2008


He wus like a pure father to me
more so than my own. . .
but he wus my dads brother
oh how i loved him so. . .
he live so far away
but stayed inside my heart
i bearly got to see him
and it really tore me apart. . .
he wus my hero
the one id be proud to say
"thats my uncle nn i love him"
still to this day
then that sad day in november
november 14 2004
he shot himself in his car
never to be heard frum anymore. . .
i love nn miss yu.
but frum the fear i must hide. . .
that one word that kills me. . .
suicide.

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  • 9 years ago

    by Andrew

    This is deep and one of your best pieces. I like the rhyming scheme, its really great.. Your poem flows really well and the emotions are well felt. The message is heart breaking really sad but the poem was brilliantly penned.