Never be Found

by Donna   Dec 10, 2008


Trying to run,
Everywheres blocked,
Lost in this world,
The gun is cocked.

I'm all alone,
With these four walls,
Secrets and lies,
They're part of the rules.

No-one can know,
It's just me and him,
The scars run deep,
Within these limbs.

I have my escape,
But he doesn't know,
I'm holding the gun,
Time to let my blood flow.

One big bang,
I fall to the floor,
Blood's flowing now,
As he comes to the door.

Peering in,
What does he see,
Me lying there,
Finally free.

No more secrets,
No more lies,
No more looking,
Into those evil eyes.

They look so scared now,
What can he do,
With his son lying there,
And blood on his shoe.

The door is locked,
As he walks away,
Leaving me there,
To rot and decay.

The son he never loved,
Lying on the ground,
His biggest mistake,
Will never be found.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Crippled Wing

    Great poem!!! flows nice and you can picture it in your head. keep up the great work!
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  • 17 years ago

    by xLeftxBehindx

    This rhyme scheme was really well played out
    it flowed so very well and every word and stanza was powerful

    this is a favorite of mine, i really like it!

  • 17 years ago

    by trippetta TC

    Thoughtful heartfelt & meaningful keep writing!!

  • 17 years ago

    by Saving Grace

    This was amazing! Very sad, but because its written so well, youve made it an enjoyable read! lol, if that makes sense? Well anyways, it flowed very well, and your rhyme scheme worked perfectly.

    No more secrets,
    No more lies,
    No more looking,
    Into those evil eyes.

    That stanza was sooo well done. It was the one that really stood out to me anyway. Flowed really well.

    Nice work, and keep it up. 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Aveena

    Really good. its fantastic. :)

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