Sleeping Alone(Free Verse)

by Ashleigh Skye   Mar 13, 2009


Head resting on feather pillows
sheets crisp like paper
locked within this glorious room
mind floating back
to when we slept under the moon
pebbles and stick beneath us
and my heart sinks as I realize
I'd rather be sore with you,
than sleeping alone in heaven.

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PLEASE COMMENT AND VOTE THANKS A LOT

*I wrote this for a contest where we had to write a poem that was 50 words or less and it had to be about a room*

*free verse-Free Verse is an irregular form of poetry in which the content free of traditional rules of versification*

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  • 14 years ago

    by CanUKissAwayMyPain

    Awww.... this is trulie a wonderful poem.

    to when we slept under the moon
    pebbles and stick beneath us
    and my heart sinks as I realize
    I'd rather be sore with you,
    than sleeping alone in heaven
    ^ my favorite part say a lot to me. and it's amazin i love it. nicely done.

    TaKe CaRe,
    Frenchy

  • 15 years ago

    by Beautiful Chaos

    Very enjoyable Ashleigh, I really liked it.

    sheets crisp like paper

    ^ I liked this description, it gives you an automatic sense of the sheets because we all know what paper is like.

    I'd rather be sore with you,
    than sleeping alone in heaven.

    ^A beautiful loving thought, great ending. All in all I think you did a fabulous job with this short piece, nice work.

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