This is a great style and you did so well with it

amazing

I love the way you use the same words to start each part of the poem! I also like the way you use "the butterfly" instead of talking about 'feelings' if you understand what I mean! 5/5

I like this, I like how you use the butterfly to represent your love. The double play on getting butterflys in the first place means that you not only love this person but they make your heart jump evertime they are near. Nice

Randy

Yesterday night
When I thought about you,
A butterfly escaped my stomach;
Plauged from the pressure in me,
Thrashing from side to side
because staying still seems so
monotonous.

^^ Wow, this is sucha great way to start the poem. I love the 3rd line. It's awesome. I can totally picture it. And I really like the title.

Yesterday night
A butterfly escaped my stomach;
I tried to reach for it but
Too nimble was his progression
That just left me proficient
Ä°n following his
Shadow.

^^ I really like how you repeated the lines. This is a reall unique poem, I love it.

Yesterday night
A butterfly escaped my stomach;
I tried to haunt it but
Too long has its eyes been hungry
From your look of love;
The only way of keeping it
Alive.

^^ I absolutely love the emotion in this stanza. And the whole story of a butterfly flying out is really amazing. How'd you think of it? What inspired you?

Yesterday night
A butterfly escaped my stomach;
I tried to nap it but
It flew away because it even
learned how to resist
the smell of flowers since it met
you.

^^ This stanza is really cute. The flow is really great.

Yesterday night,
a butterfly escaped my stomach;
I tried to catch it but
to big was its desire to see you.
If you find him please bring him back.
I need him too much,
to know what you mean to me.

^^ Wow, I love the ending. the flow throughout te whole poem was amazing. I really liked the way you didn't rhyme, because sometimes that can throw the reader off. Excellent job! Great flow!

Soda E>

Nice form and a poem full of love. Using the butterfly as a symbol of love and that you need that butterfly to remind you of the love you have for someone is a good analogy. Well done.

Yesterday night,
a butterfly escaped my stomach;
I tried to catch it but
to big was its desire to see you.
If you find him please bring him back.
I need him too much,
to know what you mean to me.

^^^
Favorite stanza..so sweet:)
This poem was filled with so much joy for life, it made me all happy just reading it:)

Take care,

5/5 Ingrid

Beautiful write dear.

5/5

I like the way you express your self, good use of words and it has a nice flow 5/5

Very,very unique. I LOVED it. Everyone knows what its like to have butterflies in their stomaches. I thought this was brilliant and I love the word choice.
One thing: "Plauged" <---??????
did you mean plagued?
Otherwise, loved it!
5/5

Hey this is such a unique poem i love it great choice of words its was perfect 5/5

"Yesterday night
A butterfly escaped my stomach;
I tried to nap it but
It flew away because it even
learned how to resist
the smell of flowers since it met
you."

My favorite part indeed. You are very good so NEVER let anyone tell you otherwise. ^_~"