I MISS YOU (acrostic)

by unknown   Aug 30, 2009


In this farewell,

Memory of you is still the only thing I wanna think about.
In this goodbye,
Smile of yours is the only thing I wanna imagine.
Sadly, I wouldn't achieve it even in my dream.

You've been everything for me,
Over days, weeks, and months.
Undoubtedly, I cannot live without you.

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  • 14 years ago

    by Karl Wild GG23

    See now this doesn't rhyme but its the best one I've read because its true and from your heart. You didn't force the words and you made me remember all the times I was hurt by love and how it made me feel just like this. Or how you want something or someone so bad but you just can't have them. I would change the slang though like "wanna" to "want to" it just hurts the poem a little bit.

    This one I'll vote because its awesome 5/5 nicely done hope to read more soon enough :)

  • 14 years ago

    by Nobodys Hero

    A ver strong and emotional write =]
    Very good job, the format suits the piece very well!