Comments : 4 my gal

  • 8 years ago

    by divine divinity

    Awesome! Its really beautiful and expressive of your feelings, it says so much about who she is to you, what she means, your feelings, excellently written, great flow and pace, well structured and to me it was flawless. :)

  • 8 years ago

    by Em

    I liked how you expressed you true emotions and love to "your gal." Another flawless piece, 5/5. Em x