Hey Moon

Ah the moon. how i love and adore the moon. so soothing. i'm glad you took time to write about it. :)

This deserves more than a nomination, and if I could I would with high pleasure in reading this. It was completely unique, the first few lines grabbed me and the thought did enter me. We never ask the moon how it shines from afar and what it desires. Absolutely heart-warming and imaginative, it brought a grand smile to my face. Please keep writing and God bless you always.

MaryAnne

Lovely poem - I really enjoyed it.

I found the 3rd stanza a little difficult in places:
- Should there be a comma after "No one ever asks" otherwise I found myself expecting the 2nd line to read "what it is that you seek".
- If the second line is a question, maybe it needs a question mark at the end.
- "an unattainable distance" also felt difficult to read (maybe deliberate though!). If not, could the "an" be removed?

One spelling issue - I believe the second line should be "shining bright"

What I think would have also been interesting to explore in the poem is how the moon waxes/wanes and rises/falls and how that also makes you feel.

Hope you don't mind my suggestions - I'm not an expert so if you don't agree with them you are probably right :)

As has been noted, the personification of our closest heavenly body reflects much light on the tides of the emotion expressed so naturally in this poem
5/5

This was really beautiful great imagery and flow, brought a smile to my face, i really enjoyed reading this poem