I Will Fight

by mia   Oct 1, 2011


I Look at you
I fall in love
I fall in love all over again when I see your face
I have never felt this way before
Some may steer me away
But I will not give up
NOT give up for us
For I will fight to the end for our happiness
I made a vow And I want the world to know
That I am forever yours and I will never give up on us.

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  • 14 years ago

    by Jenni

    I have to admit that I'd recommend to change the structure somehow because your poem does not flow very well right now. You might want to think about connecting the verses more, currently it just feels as if sentence after sentence follow, I know that this is your first poem and it's better than what my comment sounds like.
    I actually like the message because it is clear and it is shown in the poem. Furthermore are the emotions heartfelt and powerful.
    With a bit of editing this poem will be better.