Diamond

by Mason Robb   Mar 22, 2012


A diamond was lost today,
Thrown into the unknown.
By two careless tools,
Who now are quite alone.

This love was a precious gemstone,
Which they cast away.
Their dreams made a silver rainbow
that's now faded into grey.

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  • 13 years ago

    by Paul Gondwe

    This is short but brillaint and wonderfully written. I would only sugget you dont capitalise words after a comma, it removes the flow of the poem.

  • 13 years ago

    by Xanthe

    "Their dreams made a silver rainbow
    that's now faded into grey."
    --> My favorite lines :)

    The diamond is a metaphor for love, I assume.

    It's quite common these days that love is overrated, yet carelessly swatted away like an annoying fly...

    Great write! 5/5

    -X

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