by 1BrokenBeauty Jun 18, 2012
category :
Dark, fantasy /
other
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You can't break what is already broken- |
by Euphanasia
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Great poem |
by Purple Rose
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Typos: First line "brake" needs to be "break." Line nine, "it's" is supposed to be "its" and line eleven (second to last) "Im" needs to be "I'm." However, it is your poem and I am just trying to help by giving my opinion :] |