Pills pills

by Kelwin lost in thought   Feb 7, 2013


Pills pills
the more you take the better
helps with everything
sleep heart break
misery and hate
pop a few and there you go
take a hand full
and let the party begin
the more the merrier

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  • 11 years ago

    by CathyButterflyJC

    Put them down!!!!!!! PUT THEM DOWN!!!!! I love you bro, please, you are such a talented author, you prove that with every poem, including this one, great job I have to say!

  • 11 years ago

    by Hannah Lizette

    Although I truly hate pills, I like this poem. I do think it could benefit more from a different layout and some punctuation.

    Maybe add another "pills" at the beginning...and maybe even go into detail of what kind.

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