An excellent acrostic poem for a popular sport "but,
Loudly the fans go on"

My advice is put the poem alignment on the left since it's a formed poem and it should look like it's form unless you were trying to do a different type of poem then it would be good.

The poem itself is interesting to say the least since it's basically what people see and feel when they go to a game, regardless of their age and gender. Very nicely done.

5/5

-Mori