Promise

by RDJ8113   May 29, 2014


I made a promise that I'd never touch that razor.
A promise to never let myself bleed.
A promise to never hide that person inside.
But I knew you could see right through my eyes.

I made a promise that I wouldn't hide.
A promise to let out my tears and cry.
A promise not to hold them in and die.
But you saw the sign.

I made a promise to not drink.
A promise to not stumble.
A promise to not down a bottle.
A promise to not listen to that whiskey song.
But you already knew I was gone.

I made a promise to tell you.
A promise to communicate.
A promise to not break down.
A promise to not drive over the bridge.
A promise to never break a promise.
A promise.
A promise.

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  • 9 years ago

    by John Doe

    I'm sorry but I just feel that your idea isn't conveyed properly but I love your concept

  • 9 years ago

    by BlueJay

    I like the message, the purpose, the heart written between these lines. i love how you really put yourself out there with this piece. however, the repetition is way too much for such a short simple piece.

  • 9 years ago

    by Ole Carsten

    You are into something, but repeating to much, a small friendly advice find more words for your lines and replace promises