Comments : Strings

  • 9 years ago

    by Once an Angel

    You had me hooked at "collecting dust with rotting strings" - it made me shiver. This was beautifully written, hauntingly written. Thank you for finding words for such heartache and despair. I hope finding the words helped you heal just a little bit.

  • 6 years ago

    by Em

    I'm in tears!!! This hits me right in the gut and gave me goosebumps

    • 6 years ago

      by Mandy

      Oh thank you, Em! I wrote this one awhile ago but it's...probably my favorite writing I've ever done. <3 I appreciate you taking the time to read it! <3
      -Mandy

  • 6 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    Powerful writing and very fluent.

    Well done, Mandy.

  • 6 years ago

    by Milly Hayward

    I don't know how I missed this little masterpiece. You had me gripped all the way through. The rhyming and flow were excellent as was the tale. Beautifully written and absolutely has to go on my favourites list. Milly x

  • 6 years ago

    by Khai Montegrande

    Fluent and very nice! :) this goes to my favorites