This is a sonnet I wrote, that dates back to at least 2001. I recently rediscovered it on an old poetry page of mine, on a poetry site I was with previously and I decided to revamp it and share it with you. Let me know what you think;
What is Love??? (English sonnet)
What is Love, if it's not given freely?
How much can it, truly, be worth to us.
To hold onto love, it is, not easy,
But, much worse, to have it forced, upon us.
Love should be, a mutually shared thing.
No good to, unrequited, affection.
Fulfillment, Happiness, it does not bring.
Rejection remains, yet still, rejection.
Whether not, we choose, to see it, that way,
Their love still is something we can not have.
We can cry, we can plead, and we can beg,
But we can't hold their love, with naught, to grab.
See, Love's only worth it, if it is, shared.
What is love, if someone's Heart is not there???
As Always, Your Comments & Votes Greatly Appreciated, Thanks You.
Best sonnet I read in here. You nailed the meaning behind. It is full of power in expressing what love should be like.
" Love should be, a mutually shared thing." so true, it cant be love when the other side is not on the same page. It should be nurtured by two for it to become real; for it to survive.
When I first wrote it GB. I felt it lack the beauty, of which I'm enamored and strive to write with, but because it spoke truth and said something of consequence. I felt I need it to keep it and give it life. It might lack the classic beauty, I usually strive for, but it has a message some need to here.