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by Someone Invisible Dec 20, 2015
Life, society /
But if your book really speaks the truth
I may just be farther from Heaven than you.
With my crooked ways and twisted thoughts
It's sure that Hell is going to be my last stop.
Maybe God's Son and his Fallen Angel will be kind
And let me speak with you from time to time.
Or maybe you'll be too busy flying with angels
To remember me down here drowning in flames.
But either way what I know is I'll remember you
Regardless of whether you remember me because
You're the whispers of the wind, the sound of rain
And I'm the ash on the end of a forgotten cigarette.
by Maple Tree
Thank you, and you are welcome....
This poem mesmerized me from start to finish. I really and truly enjoyed the simplicity and elegance of this poem.
Someone Invisible created an heart gripping expressions of emotions comparing her love and herself as heaven and hell. Just a wonderful poem here.
the ending was a perfect closing to this piece. wonderful!!
by Someone Invisible
I honestly don't know if I'm supposed to reply to this but really thank you. It makes me happy on a base level to know people actually read my work, especially someone as talented as you. ^_^
Yes really :-) I'm nominating your poem today, it deserves to be highlighted :-)
Oh wow really really thank you for that. *^_^*
I love this!
It's deep from the heart with a creative twist and format....love your ending!!!
Aww really? Thank you!