You told me that you loved me but that was just a story .
^
That was my favorite part in this entire poem, or rant as I like to call it since poetry tends to be our ranting become beautiful.

The poem was heartfelt, I thought it needed a little more it's not bad but it had too many questions, not enough flow, and I really would have loved a more longer poem filled with more story to it if it had that many questions, I could almost understand the emotions you placed on this poem but not quiet since the questions made me a little iffy on it. Still lovely for a beginner! Welcome to the club! :)

Sorry if I offended you, I will offer you more assistance when I know you are not mad at my comment that I made for this poem. 4/5

- Moria Bella Bair

I have been here hun..
I know exactly how you feel.
Every day is a struggle now and forever. but you will make it through.

hang in there babe.

deeplydesturbed xx