Another beautiful piece. I like your thinking when it come to poetry.

Beautiful Andrea, I too am a nature frolicker, unfortunately just like you age has slowed me down. I just love the descriptive, totally see this in my mind.Brenda

LOVE this and you so much! The dance, the spirit in this piece (not to mention how I shrieked at the mention of coffee and the use of "frolic" which I don't see much).

Only thing, in the last stanza: "Ill" should be "I'll".

;)

I am a nature freak and I love the beautiful description and remember the fun times. Unfortunately age will slow us down. Take care

Another really excellent poem in particular l
like the description of old age weighing us down like stones in pockets and the rooted bones no longer swaying within spring breezes