Comments : Blinded by the Sun

  • 1 year ago

    by DarkLight

    Another beautiful piece. I like your thinking when it come to poetry.

  • 1 year ago

    by Brenda

    Beautiful Andrea, I too am a nature frolicker, unfortunately just like you age has slowed me down. I just love the descriptive, totally see this in my mind.Brenda

  • 1 year ago

    by Poet on the Piano

    LOVE this and you so much! The dance, the spirit in this piece (not to mention how I shrieked at the mention of coffee and the use of "frolic" which I don't see much).

    Only thing, in the last stanza: "Ill" should be "I'll".

    ;)

  • 1 year ago

    by Dagmar Wilson

    I am a nature freak and I love the beautiful description and remember the fun times. Unfortunately age will slow us down. Take care

  • 1 year ago

    by Milly Hayward

    Another really excellent poem in particular l
    like the description of old age weighing us down like stones in pockets and the rooted bones no longer swaying within spring breezes