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Another beautiful piece. I like your thinking when it come to poetry.
by Maple Tree
Thank you Dark Light!
Beautiful Andrea, I too am a nature frolicker, unfortunately just like you age has slowed me down. I just love the descriptive, totally see this in my mind.Brenda
by Poet on the Piano
LOVE this and you so much! The dance, the spirit in this piece (not to mention how I shrieked at the mention of coffee and the use of "frolic" which I don't see much).
Only thing, in the last stanza: "Ill" should be "I'll".
by Dagmar Wilson
I am a nature freak and I love the beautiful description and remember the fun times. Unfortunately age will slow us down. Take care
by Milly Hayward
Another really excellent poem in particular l
like the description of old age weighing us down like stones in pockets and the rooted bones no longer swaying within spring breezes