Comments : Thunder from a Poet's Eyes

  • 1 year ago

    by Brenda

    Andrea, this is just beautiful! So much inner storming going on. I totally know where you are at that moment! I just love the descriptive of all this inner strife and the calm after that storm.

  • 1 year ago

    by Em

    Such beauty in your writing.

    'virgin trees have kissed extinction' I love this line

    Also love how you end it.. Captivating from start to finish.

  • 1 year ago

    by DarkLight

    What a lovely way to start your poem. The first line really gave life to the body of this poem making worthy my nomination.
    All the best.
    Shanky.

  • 1 year ago

    by Milly Hayward

    Beautifully written and conjures up such wonderful images. I loved in particular
    Swaddling memoires like a new born, cloacked within moss upon a spring morn-

    (sorry thought I would just mention just a small typo cloacked should be cloaked.)

  • 1 year ago

    by Brenda

    Congratulations on your win Andrea! Awesome poem!

  • 1 year ago

    by Kireasha L

    Well Maple tree, looks like you've done it again! This poem deserved to win, you really get the attention of the reader in every line. Beautifully written- CONGRATS

    -ki