Beautiful imagery wistful and sad and can be interpreted at so many levels. Milly xx

This needs nominating

Excellent write, Lucero, and original as ever.
I love the layout of this piece.

SL

Just beautiful-so much imagery with this. I really like how you formatted it out and how it flowed so nicely.

Wow !!
this piece is unique. .
I love it...

5/5

gel

Have to say this poem is a MASTERPIECE! :)

Love the format.... very original.

Also the imagery fantastic.....

GREAT JOB Lucero!!

Im nominating this one!! :))

Judging Comment:

The style in this is by far the aspect that caught my eye the most. It is refreshing to see something both freeform in nature and systematic in style. The author's voice is powerful in a subtle way - which also amazed me. The gorgeously effortless tone makes this write not only soul shattering but nothing short of angelic either. Very well balanced and yet a little emotion heavy - which is common, but difficult to articulate so masterfully. This write shows a diverse set of skills and showcases the epitome of longing for another lifestyle - or even a person with another path to follow.

P.s. This was added to my favorites - it was absolutely glorious

It is almost a perfect piece. very well structured and musical, rather metaphorically and visually, than in syllable counts and in the meter, which also sound so smooth.

I love it, when I walk through fallen petals around my feet.