Comments : Roses Sweet

  • 2 years ago

    by Milly Hayward

    Beautiful imagery wistful and sad and can be interpreted at so many levels. Milly xx

  • 2 years ago

    by Em

    This needs nominating

  • 2 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    Excellent write, Lucero, and original as ever.
    I love the layout of this piece.


  • 2 years ago

    by Brenda

    Just beautiful-so much imagery with this. I really like how you formatted it out and how it flowed so nicely.

  • 2 years ago

    by Golden AnGel Rhapsodist

    Wow !!
    this piece is unique. .
    I love it...



  • 2 years ago

    by Dreamofolwin

    Have to say this poem is a MASTERPIECE! :)

    Love the format.... very original.

    Also the imagery fantastic.....

    GREAT JOB Lucero!!

    Im nominating this one!! :))

  • 2 years ago

    by BlueJay

    Judging Comment:

    The style in this is by far the aspect that caught my eye the most. It is refreshing to see something both freeform in nature and systematic in style. The author's voice is powerful in a subtle way - which also amazed me. The gorgeously effortless tone makes this write not only soul shattering but nothing short of angelic either. Very well balanced and yet a little emotion heavy - which is common, but difficult to articulate so masterfully. This write shows a diverse set of skills and showcases the epitome of longing for another lifestyle - or even a person with another path to follow.

    P.s. This was added to my favorites - it was absolutely glorious

  • 2 years ago

    by ddavidd

    It is almost a perfect piece. very well structured and musical, rather metaphorically and visually, than in syllable counts and in the meter, which also sound so smooth.

  • 1 year ago

    by P.S.

    I love it, when I walk through fallen petals around my feet.