Comments : White Roses, Painted Red.

  • 1 year ago

    by Ben Pickard

    Taking time that I don't have to borrow.

    ^^

    I love this line. The poem as a whole is fluent, well rhymed and written in an accomplished way.

    Excellent stuff,

    Ben

    • 1 year ago

      by Jenn

      Thank You Ben for taking the time to read it!

  • 1 year ago

    by William Mae

    I love the poem, as the poem states love does not die easy, it leaves behind much pain and as high as loves emotions can go as it leaves it leaves a valley that much lower. I enjoyed your poetry.

    • 1 year ago

      by Jenn

      Thank You William; That is the message I was going for, I'm glad it was not missed or misconstrued.

      "White Rose, Painted Red."
      in its self was a form of symbolism.
      Roses: for love
      White: for purity
      Painted Red: To symbolize the pain, blood sweat n tears that can often be conceived from even the purest form of love.

      "Everyone in life will hurt You, so find the ones worth suffering for."

  • 1 year ago

    by Em

    Jenn, this is excellent.

    • 1 year ago

      by Jenn

      Thank You Em!
      Glad You enjoyed it.

  • 1 year ago

    by Brenda

    Jenn, very nice. Good rhyming throughout and flowed wonderfully. I was wondering, is it scares or scars on my tattered heart? I really liked how you put the white roses painted red, well done-

  • 1 year ago

    by Ezeani Sunday

    I really love the poem. It is really hard to love but it's sweetness outlast all the treasures and pleasures on earth. Bravo dearest!!!

  • 1 year ago

    by The Fairy Mary Poppins

    I like it was beautiful, but I would suggest making into something longer not just only in one stanza that is it that I can think of

  • 11 months ago

    by yogi73

    I love the subtle wisdom in the poem. Unfortunately the pain of life must be embraced as well.
    Love the word choice and word arrangement of this poem.

    • 11 months ago

      by Jenn

      Thank You so much!