Split apart, i'll never be me again!
Till today i realize i'm still apart.
Not forgotten still all those regrets
Principles that only i'll never forget
Hate Hurt ME ME ME
I'm right defiantly!
i was am, but where does it get me?
lost lonely only i see.
they move on, be me
hold tight but to what?
time time time time
see now what i knew then
my decisions my zen.
but gone like time eating itself
right or wrong shortly balance showing its self
hold on to my truths only i know
forgiveness is the only way it'll show.
Fella it's nice to see that you finally joined up!!
Listen to the other Ben he knows his stuff :)
I like the format of this one, your word choice too and the repetition (which i'm not always a fan of as it reminds me of some very heavy nights in our youth) is really well placed and not too much, it can over power a piece sometimes and make the reader lose interest but you were spot on :)