This write is quick-fire in its delivery and almost frantic. A joy to read.
Keep posting and all the best,
11 months ago
Fella it's nice to see that you finally joined up!!
Listen to the other Ben he knows his stuff :)
I like the format of this one, your word choice too and the repetition (which i'm not always a fan of as it reminds me of some very heavy nights in our youth) is really well placed and not too much, it can over power a piece sometimes and make the reader lose interest but you were spot on :)