Comments : Not to late

  • 9 months ago

    by Ben Pickard

    Welcome to the site.

    This write is quick-fire in its delivery and almost frantic. A joy to read.

    Keep posting and all the best,

    Ben

  • 8 months ago

    by Naughtymouse

    Fella it's nice to see that you finally joined up!!

    Listen to the other Ben he knows his stuff :)

    I like the format of this one, your word choice too and the repetition (which i'm not always a fan of as it reminds me of some very heavy nights in our youth) is really well placed and not too much, it can over power a piece sometimes and make the reader lose interest but you were spot on :)

    Great job man

    Ben :-)

  • 6 months ago

    by Hamburger-Herm

    Nice. Really like these style of poems. Good job.