This write is quick-fire in its delivery and almost frantic. A joy to read.
Keep posting and all the best,
6 months ago
Fella it's nice to see that you finally joined up!!
Listen to the other Ben he knows his stuff :)
I like the format of this one, your word choice too and the repetition (which i'm not always a fan of as it reminds me of some very heavy nights in our youth) is really well placed and not too much, it can over power a piece sometimes and make the reader lose interest but you were spot on :)