Comments : Guilt, Invisibility, Privilege

  • 3 months ago

    by mossgirl19

    It's really great to read new post from great old members of this site. So glad to read from you Lauren. This poem is very raw and I can only commend your honesty and boldness to breathe this out. The rhyming is great and it flowed so naturally, coming from your situation.

    • 3 months ago

      by Lauren Crandall

      Thank you so much! I truly appreciate it. I am slowly adding some of the more recent work I've done (hopefully pushing back some of my old drivel a little further into the vault ;) ) I have some other works about my struggle of sexual orientation, but I think this is my favorite thus far. Well, maybe top 3.

  • 3 months ago

    by CJ Maleney

    All I'm going to say is you have my upmost respect for penning this

    Regards

    Craig

  • 3 months ago

    by Em

    I do like this alot but I feel because the length of the lines are all off that it'd benefit from being central though just me opinion

    Em

    • 3 months ago

      by Lauren Crandall

      Hello!

      My actual formatting is much more chaotic, but that doesn't work on this site. The alignment goes L, R, L, R, L, C, L ,C, L, R, L, C, R, L, R, L, R, C, ... etc. I agree about the lengths of the lines though. It works, in my opinion, better with the differing alignments, but maybe center would be best on here.

      Thanks!

  • 3 months ago

    by Ren

    WOW!!! I have no words! What an amazing write!!

    This absolutely deserves a (<3)^click... love button!