It's really great to read new post from great old members of this site. So glad to read from you Lauren. This poem is very raw and I can only commend your honesty and boldness to breathe this out. The rhyming is great and it flowed so naturally, coming from your situation.
Thank you so much! I truly appreciate it. I am slowly adding some of the more recent work I've done (hopefully pushing back some of my old drivel a little further into the vault ;) ) I have some other works about my struggle of sexual orientation, but I think this is my favorite thus far. Well, maybe top 3.
My actual formatting is much more chaotic, but that doesn't work on this site. The alignment goes L, R, L, R, L, C, L ,C, L, R, L, C, R, L, R, L, R, C, ... etc. I agree about the lengths of the lines though. It works, in my opinion, better with the differing alignments, but maybe center would be best on here.