Comments : Moments Of Unrequited Love

  • 1 year ago

    by Kitty Cat Lady

    Wow ... this is great!
    "Folded arms and shore gazing" ... we all know this stance so well. But the whole thing is beautifully written ... that awful feeling when you know you've lost the other person.
    Very moving.
    =^.^=

  • 1 year ago

    by mossgirl19

    Wow...actually so engrossed in it from the first word. Splendid work, Mark! Much depth and beautiful tone.You took me to a journey... a sad one. Loved it.

  • 1 year ago

    by Lucifer

    Amazing Mark, by far the best work of your.
    It's like you have written my feelings in the last stanza.

    Loved it, bro!

    Please someone nominate this..

  • 1 year ago

    by Brenda

    Mark, I just loved this. I think all of us have been in this situation. One has checked out and the other silently pleading for one more chance. Beautifully done -

  • 1 year ago

    by Ben Pickard

    Glad to see this one nominated. Excellent work indeed.

    All the very best,

    Ben

    • 1 year ago

      by Mark

      Thankyou kind poets

  • 1 year ago

    by Ren

    Wow! Amazing write. Well done!

  • 1 year ago

    by Em

    I have no words!!

    • 1 year ago

      by Mark

      Thanks Em :')

  • 10 months ago

    by IdTakeABulletForYou

    "What answers can be found in nature when all is hollow inside." - Yikes, what a perfect line... this really blew me away.

    Your word use in this piece is on point, getting your point across while also painting a beautifully tragic picture of a once impassioned romance weakened over time into one-sided love. The first verse really had me envisioning a sort of dark, gothic scene -- it really was a sort lucid imagery as I'd get from a book.

    I enjoyed this piece, great work.
    IdTakeABulletForYou