Comments : Moments Of Unrequited Love

  • 1 month ago

    by Kitty Cat Lady

    Wow ... this is great!
    "Folded arms and shore gazing" ... we all know this stance so well. But the whole thing is beautifully written ... that awful feeling when you know you've lost the other person.
    Very moving.
    =^.^=

  • 1 month ago

    by mossgirl19

    Wow...actually so engrossed in it from the first word. Splendid work, Mark! Much depth and beautiful tone.You took me to a journey... a sad one. Loved it.

  • 1 month ago

    by Lucifer

    Amazing Mark, by far the best work of your.
    It's like you have written my feelings in the last stanza.

    Loved it, bro!

    Please someone nominate this..

  • 1 month ago

    by Brenda

    Mark, I just loved this. I think all of us have been in this situation. One has checked out and the other silently pleading for one more chance. Beautifully done -

  • 1 month ago

    by Ben Pickard

    Glad to see this one nominated. Excellent work indeed.

    All the very best,

    Ben

    • 1 month ago

      by Mark

      Thankyou kind poets

  • 1 month ago

    by Ren

    Wow! Amazing write. Well done!

  • 1 month ago

    by Em

    I have no words!!

    • 1 month ago

      by Mark

      Thanks Em :')