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by Kitty Cat Lady
Wow ... this is great!
"Folded arms and shore gazing" ... we all know this stance so well. But the whole thing is beautifully written ... that awful feeling when you know you've lost the other person.
Wow...actually so engrossed in it from the first word. Splendid work, Mark! Much depth and beautiful tone.You took me to a journey... a sad one. Loved it.
Amazing Mark, by far the best work of your.
It's like you have written my feelings in the last stanza.
Loved it, bro!
Please someone nominate this..
Mark, I just loved this. I think all of us have been in this situation. One has checked out and the other silently pleading for one more chance. Beautifully done -
by Ben Pickard
Glad to see this one nominated. Excellent work indeed.
All the very best,
Thankyou kind poets
Wow! Amazing write. Well done!
I have no words!!
Thanks Em :')