Comments : Shadow Adventures

  • 2 months ago

    by Brenda

    I loved this. It's such a wonderful thing to have those memories.

  • 2 months ago

    by Ben Pickard

    I read this and imagined a grandparent or parent sitting at your bedside as a child and telling you stories they had made up or recounts of their own experiences. Whatever, it is a wonderful little poem.
    Take care,
    Ben

  • 2 months ago

    by mossgirl19

    There is a tinge of sadness as well as a certain beauty to this little poem. Flawless rhyming!

  • 2 months ago

    by Mandy Earl

    Wonderful and sad <3 :(

  • 2 months ago

    by Milly Hayward

    Excellent piece full of emotion and visuals loved it x

  • 2 months ago

    by Lucifer

    I completely agree with what Ben said..
    It reminded me of the the childhood days.

    Heartfelt!

  • 2 months ago

    by Lyical Madness

    Thank you all so much for the beautiful comments *heart eyes* xxx

  • 2 months ago

    by Em

    I'm gutted as I'd written some huge comment on this then it disappeared. I've read this many times now and each time the rawness, the longing and the memories whether sad or happy shine through and it shows this person meant alot to you and no doubt still does which makes me wonder if it is an old flame or a family member that's passed. Fantastic rhyming as ever.

    Em x

  • 2 months ago

    by Michael

    a lovely piece full of memories and emotions

    well done :)

    Michael

  • 2 months ago

    by Lyical Madness

    Thanks Em & Michael for the feedback.
    Em-It was written with both an old flame & family member who has passed in mind lol!! ;) x