Comments : I am afraid...

  • 6 years ago

    by Kitty Cat Lady

    Michael this is brilliant and personal, yet no doubt reflects the fears of many of us. And it looks so pretty! So clever! x
    =^.^=

    • 6 years ago

      by Michael

      Thank you Miss Kitty K for lovely comments x :)

  • 6 years ago

    by Mark

    Last stanza is powerful here, where there is weakness - there is strength. Well written and formated

    • 6 years ago

      by Michael

      Thank you Mark :)

  • 6 years ago

    by Milly Hayward

    Dynamic piece that's will resonate with many. Liked the line formats too. Milly x

    • 6 years ago

      by Michael

      Yes Miss Milly, a poignant and reflective piece

  • 6 years ago

    by deeplydesturbed

    Very poweful poem..
    Well done.

  • 6 years ago

    by Milly Hayward

    I wanted to nominate this previously but for some reason I thought I had used up all my nominations. Luckily I double checked so you are duly nominated :)

    • 6 years ago

      by Michael

      Thank you Miss Milly for your nomination :)

  • 6 years ago

    by Em

    Michael you have seamlessly laid your ass on the line here.. I love this it's deep, raw, honest, personal and honest all rolled into one wonderful piece

    • 6 years ago

      by Michael

      Thanks Em, all truth :)x

  • 6 years ago

    by Brenda

    Michael, an honest write. It's never easy to open yourself up like this, exposing your neck so to speak. Thank you for sharing such a personal part of who you are. Well done-

    • 6 years ago

      by Michael

      Thank Miss Brenda, as always your comments bring warmth and a trueness
      :)x

  • 6 years ago

    by Dagmar Wilson

    I am certainly afraid of the dark because I cant see what's going on around me. I often have viven in to temptations and of course I had to learn the hard way. Thank you for sharing.

    • 6 years ago

      by Michael

      Thank you Dagmar,
      Lots of educational poems around from all our experiences of life :)