Comments : The One That Got Away

  • 2 months ago

    by Milly Hayward

    A beautiful roller coaster of emotion. I feel your loss so deeply. The loss of someone so loved touches even the hardest of hearts. I think as with your other poem splitting the lines into stanzas would make it easier to read but even so a great piece. Milly x

  • 2 months ago

    by Em

    Excellent