Comments : The One That Got Away

  • 5 months ago

    by Milly Hayward

    A beautiful roller coaster of emotion. I feel your loss so deeply. The loss of someone so loved touches even the hardest of hearts. I think as with your other poem splitting the lines into stanzas would make it easier to read but even so a great piece. Milly x

  • 4 months ago

    by Em

    Excellent

  • 1 month ago

    by Tony

    I enjoyed this a lot. I actually posted a poem with the same name a few months ago. Keep writing.