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by Sherry Caayupan
Hi...is the girl a burden to the guy in this poem? I sense that she did something wrong to the guy. But anyway, what a nice piece...I like this one... :)
Oh my word <\3
by CJ Maleney
There will always be a fire. Above or below it can not be canceled out by thought. A fire is but a thirst and a thirst ultimately requires quenching.
Such a beautiful piece, with a thread of a saddening melody
Andrea, such a sad write. So much longing in this-hugs for you-
by Free verse
There is some conversation going on in the thread potf between Ben and David.
This poem is an answer to that conversation - a poem should be like this.
There is beauty, sadness, connection just everything in one single piece.
Andrea, What I love about the way you write, is your ability to tell a story, to make us feel every word and emotion. This is no exception, such a beautiful but sad piece.
What a brilliant write as always.