Comments : Chrysanthemum

  • 2 months ago

    by ddavidd

    home!!

  • 2 months ago

    by Sherry Caayupan

    Hi...is the girl a burden to the guy in this poem? I sense that she did something wrong to the guy. But anyway, what a nice piece...I like this one... :)

  • 2 months ago

    by Em

    Oh my word <\3

  • 2 months ago

    by CJ Maleney

    There will always be a fire. Above or below it can not be canceled out by thought. A fire is but a thirst and a thirst ultimately requires quenching.

    Fantastic poem

    Favorite deffo

    Craig

  • 2 months ago

    by Michael

    Miss Andrea

    Such a beautiful piece, with a thread of a saddening melody

    Much love
    Michael x

  • 2 months ago

    by Brenda

    Andrea, such a sad write. So much longing in this-hugs for you-

  • 2 months ago

    by S s...

    There is some conversation going on in the thread potf between Ben and David.

    This poem is an answer to that conversation - a poem should be like this.
    There is beauty, sadness, connection just everything in one single piece.

  • 2 months ago

    by Tara-Kay

    Andrea, What I love about the way you write, is your ability to tell a story, to make us feel every word and emotion. This is no exception, such a beautiful but sad piece.
    What a brilliant write as always.
    Tara-Kay x